Sunday, February 14, 2010

Composition Change

After some second thoughts, I came up with this composition. Excluded a lemon but kept a lime in, then added a knife and napkin. The others are a red onion and two apples. I didn't want it to look too busy on the canvas. Since I didn't move the positions of the bottle, glass and vase, the last sketch for the part on the canvas is intact. I just move the fruits around.

2 comments:

Unknown said...

Hi Toshi,

Sorry for the delay in responding to you. We had a big snow storm last week, and we are still reeling from its aftermath. I am tired of lots of shoveling.

The new composition is still fine, if not better. I really look forward to seeing the final version in my office.

Thank you, Noriko

Unknown said...

Hi Toshi,

Sorry for the delay in responding to you. We had a big snow storm last week, and we are still reeling from its aftermath. I am tired of lots of shoveling.

The new composition is still fine, if not better. I really look forward to seeing the final version in my office.

Thank you, Noriko